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Re: poetry contest
« Reply #10 on: October 28, 2008, 05:21:01 PM »
A New Promise

Asleep through pensive winter
your sunlight comes, in longer days
that melt the barriers of snow
 to the cold, frost-bitten ground

is the shine strong enough, I wonder,
to awaken the ground from sullen slumber?

Veils of rain, the spring
inundated with every trial,
you match your strength against
the will of worn, depleted ground

one trial, one chance, for every loss a gain,
can the ground accept the nurturing of the rain?

Blazoned verdure in summer,
you scorch bare ground but won’t
reach out to the shadows,
disregarding vital ground

will gentle breezes quell hungry fire, avid heat before loss
is the whole of the ground to bear the cost?

Gentle caresses, the autumn time
slowly carries each leaf down
where you see each one’s true color
embellish the cool, beautiful ground

Awaiting fulfillment, through the anxious winter scene,
Of your promise to the ground for everlasting green.


whew morag na-igo ko ani dah...a new promise..for me ahermmmm

a promise for everlasting greeeeennnn....always searching for green pasture? huuh

MY HEARTFELT CONGRATZ~~! keep it up gurl~!



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Re: poetry contest
« Reply #11 on: October 28, 2008, 05:27:45 PM »
hilig jud ka ug green gil. green grass of home

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Re: poetry contest
« Reply #12 on: October 28, 2008, 05:30:48 PM »
hilig jud ka ug green gil. green grass of home

kana green nga makaayo sa mata...hmmmm..not the "green"..u know?



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Re: poetry contest
« Reply #13 on: October 28, 2008, 05:33:37 PM »
daghan diay nga color ning green?

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Re: poetry contest
« Reply #14 on: October 28, 2008, 05:34:23 PM »
out sa ko gil. ihatod sa naho ang baktin sa bus stop. keep on dokdoking

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Re: poetry contest
« Reply #15 on: October 28, 2008, 05:35:57 PM »
daghan diay nga color ning green?

i think usa ray green..but daghan klase ug uses sa green..like:

green grass
green minded
green t-shirt
etc....



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Re: poetry contest
« Reply #16 on: October 28, 2008, 08:01:46 PM »
kadtong green ni wardz.. pangutan a unja ninjo si wardex unsa angmeaning adto... CONGRATS pod ko nimo daddy bals...heheheh.. maajong daddy diay jud ka.. bright man imong mga baktin...

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Re: poetry contest
« Reply #17 on: October 29, 2008, 04:28:10 AM »
ajo na lang fons nga mi liwat naho ahong mga baktin. wa moliwat sa anay. hihihi

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Re: poetry contest
« Reply #18 on: October 29, 2008, 06:57:03 PM »
ahahaah aws anak gud nimo hehehe unsa man diay ang anay ana.. kina brightan goro pod...